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If you visit my poetry page today
Please leave a comment, don’t walk away
A few choice words is all I ask
Be they good or bad it’s not a hard task
I’ve kicked the dog shouted at my wife
Some of these poems nearly cost my life
My fingers are aching from the pen
many I tossed and started again
So don’t come here and have a read
Think to leave a comment there is no need
Just write A few words as you pass by
If not you’ll see a grown man cry
So when you come leave a comment please
If not I hope, you get a disease
Have a nice day,,,
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a comment on a comment very good i agree ha ha bugsxx
My comment is, well done and thank you for sharing x
Well done buggs as ever ….
Wow that sis great!…..thank you 🙂 x
meant to say *is* not sis…a small moment!!
Hahaha…I hope I don’t get a disease for not commenting on some of your poems …I mostly love them …but I hate to be pressured as to avoid your curse !
So bugs , my dear friend , Your poems are all great , let this be my comment for all of your poems
Past , future , and present !
As of your hopes for me , I wish them ten fold back to you !
To leave a comment for all to see,
I must admit is not easy for me.
But not wanting to see a grown man cry,
I’ve decided to have a try.
Or maybe it’s fear of a dreadful disease
which decided me, you, to please.
So please don’t kick, nor curse, nor shout
I’m doing my best not to leave you out!
I enjoyed your poem, Buggalugs, thank you, and no, I didn’t presume you kicked and shouted because you didn’t get a comment. 🙂 Giving birth can be a painful process, can’t it?
lol merv you are so right
My Comment is : That was great fun to read 🙂 x
im commentin lol!!!! and it was brilliant as always 🙂 🙂
my comment is I enjoyed what you had to say..and it was well said too..