THE RING ON MY FINGER
I look at the ring on my finger
The one you have given to me.
So I could remember us being together
those days of pure ecstasy.
How could I forget your kisses
Your arms warmly wrapped around me
Your hand in my hand…Your skin on my skin
Up at The Black Sparrow…just you …and just me.
You’ve left your heart embedded into mine
My lips are now missing the taste of your love
The nights are so lonely..without you by my side.
I love you and miss you so very much.
I look at the ring on my finger.
The gem a deeper blue than your eyes
I’m thinking of you…each day and night
whatever I do…You are always on my mind
I kiss the ring on my finger…
Pretending it’s you whom I kiss.
This ring was yours…now it is mine.
A symbol of our love so deeply entwined.
oh what a lovely blog nmod. well done, i enjoyed reading that 🙂
Thank you Pollie…your comments are much appreciated
Beautiful words, nmod. Thank you for sharing .x
It’s always nice to know that people enjoy what I write
Thank you!!
I loved this Morvenna. I wear the Diamond aniversary band my husband gave me and it is a symbol of our love even if he is gone I still have that to remind me of him and always will as it is the only Diamond ring that he ever bought me for xmas one year in California.
Annemarie…you’ve got my name wrong…but never worry …I know you meant nmod lol…and Yes a ring it’s a very symbolic thing to have specially when given with love.
Thank you for your comments…
I loved this poem Morv – there was an aching poignancy about it.
Jo…you also got my name wrong…but hey…who cares?…the most important thing it’s that you loved my poem
THANK YOU!!
Nothing better than a heartfelt tribute to one’s true love.
Beautifully said Helensophie….Thank you…
beautiful blog…..
Thank you for reading what I wrote…and your comments are much appreciated…
Just beautiful nmod.
Thank you Angela…I’m glad you liked it…
That was lovely……x
Thank you debz…It’s nice to hear that you liked my poem…from time to time I get a bit of inspiration lol x
So lovely nmod 🙂
Thank you fy2 …I love it when people enjoy what I write…thank you for yor comment…
oh norma i loved it. it is so you thanks for letting me read this .
you are very welcome Kathy…I knew you would like it…Thanks for your comments…
nmod, That was a beautiful and heartfelt poem I absolutely loved it.
Thank you Lori…it came from the heart that’s for sure..and the heart speaks a beautiful language…well….most of the time…lol.
nmod,
I actually felt the passion in each line, a passion, I suspect, heightens in the time lapse between those golden times and the present. I also felt your longing.
I liked the poem, but it made me feel sad for you. Life has a terrible sting in it’s tail, and leaves so many lovely people with gaping gaps in their heart. But writing is a wonderful outlet for your emotions, and you seem to have a gift at expressing your feelings in words. Love R.