Out Of The Darkness
Theres a place that is calling and waiting for me,
I can’t tell you where, and I neither can see.
Its right in my mind, but not in my sight ,
I can feel it calling long into the night.
The sounds of mourning are clearly heard.
Oh were are you crying from,please not my head.
Help me oh help me, I need some respite
As the morning dawns near, I can not seem to fight.
Laying here now ,feeling drained and alone,
Come to me darling,don’t let me moan.
Forever I hear you ,day after day,
calling my name from night until day.
I’m trying to get to you,wait for me now ,
but can’t seem to manage ,please won’t you say how.
For out of the darkness,your cries I can hear
I am coming my darling please let me near.
Calling and calling,wanting me so.
don’t call so often,for I need you to go.
In the depths of my loneness, I long for your tread,
but my reason says no, for I know you are dead.
Oh mac, that made me cry (((((hugs)))))) my friend. So beautifully written xxxx skip
Thsnks skip its not meant to make you cry (((((hugs)))) i cant believe I actually wrote it xxxxmac
You got talent my friend xxx
Thanks my friend Xxxxx
Oh mac what a beautifully written poem…Thank you x
TANIA happy you enjoyed it and thanks for reading it….mac
Mac
All one can say
Well done
as good at they get
Thanks lofty glad that you liked it. Mac
what can i say but bravo, you have proved once again that you have all the abilities to write brilliantly
Thanks Cef for you encouragement and nice words. Mac
Absolutely brilliant mac. I can identify with that a hundred per cent. You have great talent. I didn’t know poetry was among your gift’s?. Well done lady and i will be looking out for more :). What a gift! 🙂 x
Well shads no one is more surprised than I am,about me writing poetry,written two in my life this one and the one yesterday.Thanks for your comments. Shads xxxxxxx Mac
Nice poem Kathy ,very sad …I feel that I’m getting to know a different side of you , thanks for sharing xxxx
Thanks nmod ,seems this side of me I did’t know either,learning?…..mac
WOWmac,what can i say that hasnt already been said,i honestly thought you copied this,so so good,well done,xx
Thanks for reading,glad that you liked it,…mac
enjoyed it very much mac. you definately have talent 🙂 xx
Thanks sasha glad that you enjoyed it…mac
well done macathy. now get back to work hee hee!
gee Jcb i am entitled to a lunch break aren’t I????????????
Absolutly brilliant , it brought tears to my eyes well done mac peggy xxx
Thanks you Peggy glad that you liked it ,,,,,mac
Just read this, so moving , so talented, well done mac