Last Sunday …
Last Sunday
My last Sunday of tears waiting by the phone
I’ve given you the last chance . I’m just moving on
So many broken promises and shuttered dreams for us both.
But I’m brave , I choose life …I’m out of this hole…yes OUT !
I can stay no longer here , it’s dark and it’s cold .
It’s sad so very sad . I’ve been weeping too long .
All of the pieces I’m picking up no more
I’m sweeping up the pieces ,I’ve been trying so long
To stick them up together …waiting by the phone
What have I become ? I’m just a shadow of the old me.
To love you was oh… so beautiful , but there’s nothing left.
Just tears and the waiting for yet another heartache.
Discarded and stashed in an unwanted goods box
Just there among gadgets you don’t care for anymore
That’s where you are keeping me …but I’m getting out
I’m human with feelings …I’m honest and caring
And loved you so deeply ,I couldn’t have given you more.
Today it’s the day . I’m waiting no more
My heart still broken , my soul a bit lost
I’m crying and smiling , it feels good to be strong .
I’m moving on with life …and again I’ ll be whole.
well lady u have moved me with this so strong in feeling and so right for so many,
in similar place.
thank u and good luck in all future life Steve x
Thank you Steve .
Very poignant nmod. No wonder you are so good with words at the game site.
Hope that, if this does apply to you, you have been able to move on. Do you do any creative writings? Thanks !
I just write the odd poem Sophie… Thank you for you comments. Much appreciated.
Good fo you girl!! You will find out just how strong you can be. My best wishes to you for the future you deserve. “I am woman, hear me roar………………..” xoxoxox
Lol fy2 …I’m roaring with you ! xxx
Norma, I wish you the best and hope you know that now you can move on with your life and your heart will mend my friend.Loved reading what you have written. Take care . Marie
Thank you Marie ..
Well-written, Norma. ..Love to see the strength and conviction.
Thank you for sharing it with us. xxx
Thank you Kate
Nmod
when i was chatting earlier i never kney about your situation.
My friend what can i say after reading what you wrote.
there’s no need to say anything lofty …such is life
Thank you .
Nmod I wish you all the best and you do have the strength…Thank you for sharing Ann xxx
Thank you Ann xx
Nmod , Such power you have in your words. I am with Sophie, you should write and be published. You have touched so many people here with your words, both men and women . Just think whom you could touch beyond this site. I will be the first in line to buy your first book. Thank you for such beautiful writing and emotions.
Thank you for your kind words …writing helps me deal with my emotions.
Being able to post them here a chance to be heard …the comments I receive help me to further work through my feelings.
That people like what I write it’s a positive thing to me…a kind of win -win situation.
You are a wordsmith, Norma. Have you thought about writing an e-book to share with the rest of the world? Lots of folks do it, and actually make money at it. All the information to get started is on the Internet. Food for thought . . .:-)
Never thought of that Normi …the idea of leaving something written for my children and grandchildren appeals to me .I would certainly look into it.
Thank you for your words of encouragement …much appreciated.
Good for you nmod, what courage and strength you have, I so admire you and wish you all the best for a very happy future, love skip xxxx
I’m battling my own demons skip…I’m doing it publicly.. The encouragement
And support of all of you here its helping me a great deal . Thank you ! xx
Great nmod and knowing you as i do you will beat this and come out stronger ….you do write very well hugs max
Thank you Kathy…you never fail me my friend .xx
Norma you will be fine honey you have all of your friends here with you I do understand what you’v been through lets just say av experienced similar
Thank you for your support. Much appreciated. You are right I will be ok
Thanks again.
what a lovely poem nmod. so full of emotion. If it does refer to you i know you will come through this wiser and stronger. xx 🙂
I am an emotional roller coaster Pollie… Writing helps me to stay on track .
Thank you for your positive comments …much appreciated.